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Question:
The number of people who live in the apartments is increasing rather than living in the housing.
Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?
Sample Answer:
Living in the apartment is believed that it can offer efficiency of life especially for the newly wed couples compared to staying in the housing. However, those young couples are more likely to become independent family when they decided to live in the housing.
On the one side, majority newly wed couples prefer to live in the apartments since they feel more efficient to handle their routine family's duties such as repairing and maintanance of electronic equipment, monthly gas and electrical bill, and also cleanliness services. Those help facilities are currently included in package that young married couple receive from the apartment's management. For instance, some of apartments management command service charges to the occupants that will be collected once in a year to cover all the services. The occupants do not have to pay per month and visit several public facilities outlet. Therefore, they can save their time efficiently. In contrast, residential life is more complex than apartment life. Young couples who prefer to live in housing will face the more complicated problems in taking care of household matters. For example, when they have to take fully responsibility to deal with the demage of one of the electronic devices in the home.
On the other side, one of the housing benefits is that make the occupants become more independent. It is because, they will do their home duties without helping from others. For example, for paying the electrical bill, they need to visit the outlet regularly every month by themselves. That means, one of the drawbacks of living in the apartments is the occupant's behaviour will more likely to become spoiler than that families who live in the house. That is to say that some parts of their family life are handled by the apartment's owner. For example, the occupants will never know how to manage their own monthly expenditures for gas and electricity usage.
In conclusion, even though living in the apartments is more efficient for the newly wed couples, the young couples who live in the housing are more likely to become the independent families.
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