My Weekly Journal #11 (Advantage-Disadvantage Essays)

Hi everyone.. 

Sebagaimana yang telah kita bahas sebelumnya, writing task 2 itu terdiri dari beberapa jenis soal. Salah satunya adalah Advantage-disadvantage essays. Nah, kali ini kita akan bahas itu yah guys..

Advantage-disadvantage terdiri dari 3 tipe essai:

1. Advantages-disadvantages
2. Advantages-disadvantages with an opinion
3. Advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Apa sih perbedaan antara ketiganya? Baik. kita ulas satu persatu yah.

1. Pada tipe pertama, kalian hanya perlu memberikan pendapat terkait advantage dan disadvantage suatu background. Boleh dengan menuliskan hanya satu ide untuk setiap sisi, ataupun menuliskan lebih dari satu.
2. Pada tipe kedua, selain memberikan poin advantages atau disadvantages, kalian perlu memberikan personal opinion terhadap keduanya juga pada bagian kesimpulan.
3. Pada tipe ketiga, penulis akan menerangkan hal mana yang lebih dominan antara advantages atau disadvantages suatu mosi. Hanya saja, pada  umumnya, tipe soal jenis ini selalu dimengagkan oleh sisi disadvantages.

Today's Question

Some people think that computer games are bad for children, while others believe that they are useful. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of computer games and give your opinion.

Sebagaimana instruksi yang diberikan, selain mengemukakan advantages and disadvantages, penulis harus ampu memberikan opini.

Mari kita mulai menyusun paragraf demi paragrafnya:

• Paragraph 1 : 
• Background : Some would argue that video games are not good for kids, while others would say that they can provide some benefits.
• Thesis : While games can improve children's language skills, I believe that they result in children not exercising and becoming overweight.
• Paragraph 2 (Body Paragraph 1):
• Topic sentence : The main advantage to playing computer games when a person is young is that it exposes young people to foreign languages in an authentic context.
• Explanation : This enables them to practice a second language in real life which is much more enjoyable and productive than the classroom.
• Example :  For example, teenagers in Asia can chat to American and British people while they play online games like World or Warcraft.
• State if you agree or not : Despite this, I believe that this encourage children to lead a very sedentary lifestyle which can lead to poor health.
• Paragraph 3 (Body Paragraph 1)
• Topic sentence : Playing online games for extended periods of time means that children to do very little exercise.
• Explanation : This leads to obesity related disease, such as diabetes and heart disease, later, in life because they become obese. 
• Example : For example, it is estimated by the WHO that children are now 30% more likely to be fatter than kids due to the fact that they now prefer to play indoors rather than outside where they are more likely to get exercise.
• State if you agree or not : I believe that this makes over consumption of video games dangerous and they should only be used in moderation.
• Conclusion (Paragraph 4)
• Restate the thesis : In conclusion, although computer games can help children improve their linguistic ability, they also prevent them from getting enough exercise and they should ld therefore only be used springly.
• Suggestion : Where possible, some serious consequence should be taken into consideration.

Nah itulah tadi penjelasan dan sample answer yang mirip. Semoga bermanfaat ^^

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